First I was like lol but then I serious.
Son, I'm disappoint. Bad story bro. An internet meme is something you should cherish and take care of, but this. Mr. Shoop would CHARGE HIS LAZOR in disgust.
Sence the posting guidlines told me to offer constructive criticism to a low scoring submission, then all I can say is, take it down, there are to meny flash videos like this one on newgrounds, and its got to stop.
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